Thursday, 20 August 2015

My lemon story

I looked at the Lemon closely... I felt like my mouth would explode into lemon juice. It smelt tangy
But I tried to keep it positive so I ate it.  My mind was everywhere I couldn't think. It was a little sour but it was great. After the taste it smelt like a regular lemon juice and I was correct it did also taste a little sweet and like lemon juice I could see the seeds well I was eating, I felt like I was in HEAVEN I love lemons so much they are so bright and lemon.


My next steps are to remember to put full stops and capital letters and to use describing words in my story's.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Bonnie. Very great story how you described what it taste Like. Your next step from me is to write ' While ' instead of 'well' Other than that, have a good day!